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Drops of water tumble towards the Earth, miniscule craters forming upon their impact. A gust of wind causes each droplet to spiral into the bark of trees and leaves tremble at their touch. Clouds pull apart their seams, their misty fingertips leaving trails along the sky. Summer is busying himself with painting the world in lush hues as Rain brushes past him. He smiles at her, but she does not smile back. Dewdrops garnish her shoulders as she continues to ignore him. Summer does not breathe easy as he begins to pour a deeper green into the grass. His breath flutters as Rain twirls up thunderstorms. Drizzling the ground with lightning, she smiles.

Hands wet with soil Summer looks to her, though she is engaged in her best effort to flood the earth. With a flimsy touch he reaches out, whispering in warm breezes. She stops. He hangs violent reds against the sky and drapes soft whites to dull the color. A pink haze covers the land as Rain scowls. She begins her tumultuous course to sit upon the bloom of water that is her throne. Darkness glides into the ground and fireflies dapple the landscape. He winces beneath her gaze as he hums with the crickets.

Summer remembers the last lie he said to her.

"I do not need you."
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely beautiful. And then that ending. :heart:
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner May 27, 2014   Writer
Oh wow, thank you so much. :blush:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really loved this work to be honest. I loved how this work carried its message as well as how it humanized Summer. The best part of this prosetry was the last line. It literally gave the whole work a naturalist perspective. Its open to interpretation as well as being open for everyone to ponder on. Frankly speaking, that's a good thing :) Keep writing and stay happy.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Writer
:blush: Oh my, thank you so much. I really wanted to humanize him, so I'm glad that shone through. ♥

I will, thank you again! :love:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) You stay happy and wonderful. You're a wonderful writer and a gem of a person. Truly.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Writer
I  will most certainly try. <3 Thank you so much, your words always mean so much to me. ♥
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) :hug: stay blessed. And stay happy. You're a wonderful writer and a gem of a person.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much. :cuddle:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) God bless you.
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Ahavati Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional General Artist
Nicely written.
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