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Momma said to never marry an astronaut,
they will always prefer the twinkling starlight
to the light in your eyes.

They'll only end up in ships that float
aimlessly in zero gravity and you will not be there.
Momma said to never marry an astronaut.

You will stand firmly on the earth,
clutching the ground and knowing
they will always prefer the twinkling starlight.

Planets will fracture and stars will collapse
long before he recognizes he can travel
to the light in your eyes.
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Given 2014-01-29
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was simple to understand and I really honestly like it! I mean it is honest and well written and the theme is both a little 'technical' mixed with human emotions. Congratulations for the DD!
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear you like it and found it simple enough to understand. ♥ Thank you so much again. <3
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome! I hope to read more of your works :la:
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014   Writer
:heart:! Aw, thank you!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: You are welcome!
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
congrats on the DD ^^ lovely piece.
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014   Writer
Thank you so, so much! I'm honored you think so. ♥
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Beautiful!
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014   Writer
:heart: Thank you so much.
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, ma'am. (:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014   Writer
:tighthug:
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cality Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The cascade is a wonderful form, and you did a brilliant job with it. The last stanza is gorgeous. 

Also, 'empyrean' is a beautiful word, and makes a perfect title here. :hug:
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014   Writer
Yes it is a fantastic form. ♥ Thank you so much, oh I'm so happy to hear it came out well. :heart:

I know, when I was looking for a title I came across that word somehow and I knew it'd be perfect.
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cality Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :hug:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014   Writer
:huggle:
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HecticHarmony Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014   Writer
:heart::blushes: Oh my, thank you.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WAIT, WOAH, WOAH! ANOTHER DD?!?!?! YESSSSSSSSSS, Stephanyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. :love: :love: :love:
I have to edit our interview!
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :tighthug: Thank you so much, really. Thank you. Emote Cuddle Love 
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. <33 :iconloveyouplz:
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
:iconilyhugplz:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
Congrats on the feature, Stephany! This is very wistful.  Great job on the form :)
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, Shane. <3 I'm honored you think so. ♥
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wordeea Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
congratulations !! :squee: HUUUUG !!
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
Eeee, thank you so much! :love: HUUUUUG BACK. <3
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:iconsonicandwarriorsfan1:
Wow! :wow:
You really know how to make the words speak-it's amazing.  :)
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
:blush: Oh gosh, thank you so much! Really, thank you. ♥
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:iconsonicandwarriorsfan1:
You're welcome-you deserve it, quite frankly. :)
Short stuff is even harder to write than long stuff-you have less words and space to get the meaning across-but you did a good job of it. :)
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
Awww, thank you so much. :blush: You're right there is only so much to say in a small amount of words. I'm glad it all came across. ♥ Thank you so much again.
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:iconsonicandwarriorsfan1:
You're welcome.
I like that you're humble about this-some people let glory get to their heads.
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014   Writer
:heart:
Oh, golly, thanks. You're right, some people do let it get to their heads, I'm trying not to let it. I'm still the same person after all. ♥
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:iconsonicandwarriorsfan1:
Yes you are. :)
I generally like people who are that way. 
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014   Writer
:hug:

Likewise, they're much easier to get along with.
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Cortex-Aire Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is so lovely...you have such a gift for words! =)
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you ever so much! Oh gosh, doubly thank you! :heart:
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Cortex-Aire Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! You're really talented! ^^
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
:heart: Oh my, thank you so much. .:blush:. 
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Cortex-Aire Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
=D
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Marymarx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
:heart: Thanks so much. <3
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Euxiom Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
:iconlawooplz: congraaattsss

this is probably one of my favorite pieces of yours
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
THANK YOU. YOU'RE SO COOL.

Awwww. :blushes:
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IAmDefective Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   General Artist
I so love it.
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
:hug:
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:iconchibli-chan:
Chibli-chan Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice poem! ^-^
Also well done on the DD!
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:iconirrevocablefate:
IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. <3
Double thank you! c:
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TruthisTruth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation! :clap:
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IrrevocableFate Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you ever so much! :huggle:
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TruthisTruth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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